Nick 的作文

寫英文作文，千萬不要用縮寫。
寫英文作文，千萬不要用縮寫。
寫英文作文，千萬不要用縮寫。
X it's
O it is / it has

注意時態，12-7 12-8 時態錯用太多。

注意單複數，可數不可數。

句末之句號 逗號 問號等標點符號，
不可放在行首，須放在句尾。12-8 第二行


12-1
根據題意，整篇文章應用現在式。

I get up at 6:00 A.M.
After washing my face and brushing my teeth, I go to school.

I have English class every Monday. 不用加a 或 an。
Our English teacher teaches   us new words.
I do my homework for seven hours after school / after going home.

12-2
Chinese New Year's  Eve

時間副詞通常放在句尾。
I have lost a lot this year.


12-4
看清楚題目的要求，否則會扣分。
本題是brother的生日。

12-7
My family spent the whole day in Tainan.
第二行太多逗號，逗號不能當連接詞。
時態有問題。

When we got to Tainan,

played the guitar



12-8
Yesterday was Mid-Autumn Festival.
We had a barbecue, watched  觀賞 the moon, and had snacks.

Mom told my sister and me a story.

你的which 是指medicine，medicine怎麼會永遠活著？
which could/would make people live forever...

After she took the medicine........

goddess 女神

We ate some snacks.